Writing Ch. 16
I've been working on chapter 16. I've actually written it twice, starting playing it out too. It's hard. I really am having a difficult time with this chapter. I mean this is the chapter we find out but do I answer everything at once or do I spread it out in a couple of chapters?
My first attempt was boring. Cassandra and Bella fighting and finally Bella answering the questions. I found it dull. There had to be a better way to start getting answers but leave you all wanting more at the end of the chapter. Then I realized there is so much we don't know about Bella so I would like to explore that. Maybe even Mortimer. What were they like when they were younger and how did that help get them where they are now?
I know people love this story - thanks for telling me so! It really makes me feel good to know my writing is appreciated. Especially because I feel like such a novice. It's almost like trying to learn to walk and everyone's encouragement has been SO motivating. I can not express how much it means to me.
Also thank you for your patience.
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